Really good script, I love how dramatic and enticing it is! Really good use of shot sizes and terminology. Only thing I would say is that it is a bit too ambitious, we need to be realistic of what we can achieve as a group. Other than that, good job!
I really like the adding of diagetic sounds (chains) and I think its a really cool idea for the background and bringing it all together. I don't know how we would do the younger children home video scene and possibly miss this out (talked about it). But I like the idea of the quick scenes of the past. The whole idea of the chains is such a cool idea! It adds a background that makes it seem more edgy!! Well done!! xx
Really good script, I love how dramatic and enticing it is! Really good use of shot sizes and terminology.
ReplyDeleteOnly thing I would say is that it is a bit too ambitious, we need to be realistic of what we can achieve as a group.
Other than that, good job!
I really like the adding of diagetic sounds (chains) and I think its a really cool idea for the background and bringing it all together.
ReplyDeleteI don't know how we would do the younger children home video scene and possibly miss this out (talked about it). But I like the idea of the quick scenes of the past.
The whole idea of the chains is such a cool idea! It adds a background that makes it seem more edgy!!
Well done!! xx